Thursday, November 12, 2009

Departed !

Dragged in life
Essence persisting
Prejudiced fate
Alone in this journey
Race tend to end
Tendancy to stay
Eyeing for more
Departed this world


This acrostic is dedicated to my late uncle, who passed away this september...




13 comments:

  1. hey Stardust, this was a different and wonderful poem on Departed.
    lovely written acrostic! :)

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  2. thanx a lot Leo !!
    you are a true inspiration :)

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  3. I like the way you interpreted the prompt for your poem. Nice.

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  4. Dragged in life is a line that stops me in my tracks.

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  5. "Alone in this journey" resonates ... alienation is sad.

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  6. Thank you for the valuable comments :)

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  7. Yes, we can depart from life, even though we are still living. I loved the line "dragged in life" ... how true!

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  8. very touching..You surely have a way with words ..!

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  9. Thank you for your amazing words of encouragement..... :)

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