Their love story is unique — It starts at dawn And ends at dusk. They meet every day; He knows exactly How to make her sway. He seems toxic, Yet his punctuality Is nothing short of magic. They are committed; Though he cannot stay with her always, This she has accepted. He sends his comrades To watch over her all night, Yet she waits — For him to return next day. He knows how to make His entrance — Full of warmth, Full of hope He brings. She cannot survive without him, For her life depends on him. Before he departs, He gives her a kiss — A ritual He would never miss. His kiss lingers An hour after he’s gone. She just looks up, And smiles… For she knows — There will always be Sunshine . - Stardust ✨
Stardust this is so true, it hurts my heart to think of it. And the photo brought tears to these tired old eyes. Very well said indeed!
ReplyDeleteit's a real picture of Africa...
ReplyDeletei like your take on this prompt!
keep on writing dear!
g'nayt!
Amazing piece of work Stardust. You have done a Great Job!
ReplyDeleteWhat a gripping poem and heartbreaking photo. Africa is a continent rich in resources but has always been exploited. There are many who are doing things to make it right but there is still so much to be done.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot for your feedback Amias...
ReplyDeletethe first thing that reminds me of Africa is the malnourished children... so I'd to highlight this issue in the prompt...
@ Amity Me, thank you for your encouragement and feedback....
ReplyDelete@ Saraswathan, thanks a lot for your feedback :)
ReplyDelete@ The Write Girl, thanks a lot for your feedback.. Yeah there are loads to be done in under-developed and developing countries as well.. I wish they all get the help that they deserve....
ReplyDeletei like your blog! we share the same template :)
ReplyDeleteHappy blogging...
thanx Esther :) Happy blogging to you too...
ReplyDeleteYou said it clear an loud..! liked your take..:)
ReplyDeletethank you for stopping by and dropping a comment :)
ReplyDeleteVery Well Written... wat i don't understand is why ppl of Africa can't understand this.. When we can understand. It's not a very Poor country either..Many diamond mines are in Africa..Its a hub of wild life attraction.. Still tribes of Africa Suffer from dacades...!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your valuable suggestions and comments Uday :)
ReplyDeleteIt is painful to look at and read. But true.
ReplyDeleteHi Eva, Thank you for your feedback :)
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