Departed !

Dragged in life
Essence persisting
Prejudiced fate
Alone in this journey
Race tend to end
Tendancy to stay
Eyeing for more
Departed this world


This acrostic is dedicated to my late uncle, who passed away this september...




Comments

  1. AnonymousNovember 12, 2009 at 12:19 AM

    hey Stardust, this was a different and wonderful poem on Departed.
    lovely written acrostic! :)

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  2. stardustNovember 12, 2009 at 12:45 AM

    thanx a lot Leo !!
    you are a true inspiration :)

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  3. Loch RobNovember 12, 2009 at 12:46 AM

    I like the way you interpreted the prompt for your poem. Nice.

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  4. Kathie BrownNovember 12, 2009 at 3:13 AM

    Interesting acrostic.

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  5. SandyCarlsonNovember 12, 2009 at 6:14 AM

    Dragged in life is a line that stops me in my tracks.

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  6. stardustNovember 12, 2009 at 12:44 PM

    thanks a lot everyone !!

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  7. Carlos GesmundoNovember 13, 2009 at 7:13 PM

    "Alone in this journey" resonates ... alienation is sad.

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  8. Tumblewords:November 14, 2009 at 1:38 AM

    Nice acrostic!

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  9. stardustNovember 14, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    Thank you for the valuable comments :)

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  10. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)November 14, 2009 at 12:35 PM

    Yes, we can depart from life, even though we are still living. I loved the line "dragged in life" ... how true!

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  11. stardustNovember 14, 2009 at 1:12 PM

    Thank you Amias :)

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  12. VanessaDecember 17, 2009 at 5:31 PM

    very touching..You surely have a way with words ..!

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  13. stardustDecember 21, 2009 at 11:58 AM

    Thank you for your amazing words of encouragement..... :)

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