Their love story is unique — It starts at dawn And ends at dusk. They meet every day; He knows exactly How to make her sway. He seems toxic, Yet his punctuality Is nothing short of magic. They are committed; Though he cannot stay with her always, This she has accepted. He sends his comrades To watch over her all night, Yet she waits — For him to return next day. He knows how to make His entrance — Full of warmth, Full of hope He brings. She cannot survive without him, For her life depends on him. Before he departs, He gives her a kiss — A ritual He would never miss. His kiss lingers An hour after he’s gone. She just looks up, And smiles… For she knows — There will always be Sunshine . - Stardust ✨
this is really a wonderful take on a stranger Dusty..! :)
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good one Stardust... perfect stranger!
ReplyDeleteNice acrostic.
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Do you hate it too?
"If you're going through Hell, keep going."
Stranger is so nicely discribed. :)
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Amazingly beautiful !! Its "strange"ly perfect !!!
ReplyDeleteThat's a cool signature. I really liked your acrostic poem.
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